Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Page 11 Mulligan

I am depressed. I posted a page that wasn't ready to be posted and I rushed to finish and it looks it. Yes I am referring to page 11. So I've decided to re-post the new and improved page 11 and you can see for your selves how lifeless the original page 11 looked by comparison.


Teo said...

The new panel works well, nice comp with the door and her.

FJH said...

Thanks Teo, I thought so too, though the new page was posted mostly to fix Paragon's facial expressions. Funny that I ended up eliminating her face from a panel completely.